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11/14/18, 5:02 AM
I thought that this was quite sexy. I love subliminal hypnosis and obliviousness. So yeah good stuff.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/14/18, 4:59 AM
How do you know this isn't the introduction?
11/14/18, 3:45 AM
What a well written and amazing story!! Thank you so much! What a haunting ending...
Nov 13, 2018
11/14/18, 3:40 AM
This is a quick overview of what could have been a great series. I love the concept. I would have loved to read a series about the capture of each one in their previous lives, their resistance, their acquiescence, how they became obedient sex slaves, the transformation from running rebel to obedient slave for Cody, Jake and Brett. I like the animal references, but again, if we knew their story they could have fitting names from their previous lives and transformation as well as their physical attributes. I'd really like to read a story series from you with these factors included. I like the way you think making men into animals. Grrwoof.
Anonymous
11/14/18, 3:32 AM
It had a good amount of obliviousness, but could have used more sex scenes to complement the growing number of oblivious guys.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/13/18, 10:35 PM
wow, excellent concept! Please continue this story!
nycboot
11/13/18, 9:38 PM
This is such an incredible story. I also wonder, after all the Mariposa is gone, what is going to be the long-term effect on Derek and Charles. And hey, maybe Todd can have a few drinks? :)
Anonymous
11/13/18, 9:09 PM
I had a hunch someone would take a double mariposa at some point, looking forward to see the aftermath! at least Charlie Blue seems happy in his new
11/13/18, 8:24 PM
You bros turn me on in ways that I never expect. Chris's physical transformation didnt do much for me, but the side effect was hot as hell - the way men treated him after was amazing. And Matt going full douche? Man, I loved that.
fal.taylor@yahoo.com
11/13/18, 4:48 PM
Wow I absolutely love this conclusion! From having their speech change to broken English and mixed with Czech (I'm so glad it happened from a few chapters back) to the absolutely hot train of fucking! And of course, I love the overall theme of the underwear fetish! Great work!