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Nov 13, 2018
11/14/18, 3:40 AM
This is a quick overview of what could have been a great series. I love the concept. I would have loved to read a series about the capture of each one in their previous lives, their resistance, their acquiescence, how they became obedient sex slaves, the transformation from running rebel to obedient slave for Cody, Jake and Brett. I like the animal references, but again, if we knew their story they could have fitting names from their previous lives and transformation as well as their physical attributes. I'd really like to read a story series from you with these factors included. I like the way you think making men into animals. Grrwoof.
Anonymous
11/14/18, 3:32 AM
It had a good amount of obliviousness, but could have used more sex scenes to complement the growing number of oblivious guys.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/13/18, 10:35 PM
wow, excellent concept! Please continue this story!
nycboot
11/13/18, 9:38 PM
This is such an incredible story. I also wonder, after all the Mariposa is gone, what is going to be the long-term effect on Derek and Charles. And hey, maybe Todd can have a few drinks? :)
Anonymous
11/13/18, 9:09 PM
I had a hunch someone would take a double mariposa at some point, looking forward to see the aftermath! at least Charlie Blue seems happy in his new
11/13/18, 8:24 PM
You bros turn me on in ways that I never expect. Chris's physical transformation didnt do much for me, but the side effect was hot as hell - the way men treated him after was amazing. And Matt going full douche? Man, I loved that.
fal.taylor@yahoo.com
11/13/18, 4:48 PM
Wow I absolutely love this conclusion! From having their speech change to broken English and mixed with Czech (I'm so glad it happened from a few chapters back) to the absolutely hot train of fucking! And of course, I love the overall theme of the underwear fetish! Great work!
Anonymous
11/13/18, 2:02 PM
I love gradual transformations. very hot story will read again.
Anonymous
11/13/18, 4:49 AM
Fuuuck! I'm so glad Blu is here to stay, he's so much more fun and sexy than Charles, I wonder if he's going to still feel some undeniable sexual chemistry with Pierce? And Todd? ;)
LongtimeFan
11/13/18, 3:49 AM
OH NO! Just when I thought everything was OK since the two sorted out the double identity problem...you throw in ANOTHER twist! A part of me saw it coming with Blu's (absolutely amazing) monologue about finally feeling free, but it's still a surprise. This is SUCH an amazing story! You're a phenomenal author. :D