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Anonymous
11/12/18, 5:33 PM
Man, this was the funniest episode yet! Some GREAT lines- His sleuthing had hit a brick wall. Being a dick was hard. ============= Kev said. “Said his name is Blue. You believe that shit? Who ever heard of a family that was color-coded?” “Shit, man, my whole family’s named Brown,” responded Theo “O” Brown. ============================= “You serious? The way he was checkin’ out your goods? Puh-lease!” “Who wouldn’t look at this damn thing?”, Derek asked. “It’s so big, it’s got its own gravitational pull.”
Anonymous
11/12/18, 5:09 PM
Blu and Mike will be meeting up in the not-too-distant-future, I am sure! Idris Elba as a porn star?! "Sexiest Man Alive" - I don't think that's what "People" Magazine meant! But what an idea! - a rotating cast of actors as a famous porn star!
Anonymous
11/12/18, 4:41 PM
--way to keep juggling the characters! I agree that the exposition was complicated, but it does help explain things a bit. Now on to the last act!
Anonymous
11/12/18, 4:27 PM
THis was funny! Slapstick comedy of errors! Very enjoyable!
Boston Satyr
11/12/18, 11:53 AM
just read this. amazing story and skilled writing. more, please!
Anonymous
11/12/18, 11:41 AM
Have we just had a visit from Time?
drgnawbones@gmail.com
11/12/18, 7:03 AM
I really like this series. The payoff for the Brandon twist is great!
Nov 9, 2018
Anonymous
11/12/18, 5:41 AM
You're one of the best writers on this site. Great story!! Keep writing!!!
Jun 11, 2016
Anonymous
11/12/18, 5:19 AM
I read this story when it was posted. Hotter on the re-read!!!
Anonymous
11/12/18, 5:09 AM
I remember reading this story when it was first posted. So fucking hot!!!!