Recent Comments

rubber
11/8/18, 11:52 PM
10 rounds or 5 rounds of bliss. Players 3 & 4 are already fucking in the 1st round. You already hit the mother load. You need to tease the readers into wanting to read the new chapter as you clearly have set up an expectation of 3 or 7 more rounds.
11/8/18, 11:49 PM
Please tell me there will be more parts!
Anonymous
11/8/18, 11:13 PM
Good story. But for something called The Jockstrap Transformation, I feel like it could have been slower and more focused on the transformation. It seemed quite rushed.
Anonymous
11/8/18, 10:59 PM
this is very hot! can't wait for the party. Would love to see more in depth mind fucking of the workers. Thanks for this !!
Nov 13, 2009
Martin
11/8/18, 9:09 PM
This story is really hot, short intense and hot. I got very hard reading it! Why don't you write any stories like these anymore, z119z2000?
Anonymous
11/8/18, 9:00 PM
very hot! Love to see some sneaker and gear theft!
11/8/18, 6:49 PM
Added some paragraph breaks for easier reading
11/8/18, 3:31 PM
Hot little story. I loved the POV! Totally could have called it Top Dog :)
11/8/18, 2:51 PM
Sorry about the paragraph breaks. I finished writing this late last night and didn't revise it enough
Anonymous
11/8/18, 2:47 PM
More paragraph breaks please lol. Sometimes that felt like reading a wall of text.