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10/16/24, 12:35 PM
Just revisited this series. Incredible writing and slower, enticing pace. The chorus of praise above should be heeded. You MUST continue this.

10/16/24, 2:24 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) It is something that _this_ is the story i get the most comments on--on this site and Ao3. This story was a commission and the guy ran out of money and we've fallen out of touch. _Maybe_ one day I'll return to it but I have other works that I'm much more interested in writing. I was thinking that when my SubscribeStar is up and running properly then I'll run a poll if anyone is interested in some of my older works being revised &/ continued. I kinda think it's strange that this is the work everyone wants. I'm sorry to say I barely even think about it or remember what I wrote as it was so long ago. All the same, thank you so much for the praise!
Anon
10/12/24, 1:14 AM
This is a very fascinating story. Usually with stories like these, the demon winds up turning the transformed into a hedonistic, outright sinister force with little regard for love or anything else beyond phyiscal pleasure. Seeing Sebastian try to figure out how to manage Dez and not give away too much- and his remembrance on how to deal with the fae from his grandmother's advice were interesting and fascinating points. Additionally, Sebastian realizing he loved Taylor as a friend- and now so much more is interesting- most of the time it usually does seem like in many stories like these- friendship and the like kind of get thrown to the wayside as everything kind of just gets focused on pleasure when the sinister nature of a demon is emphasized. In other stories, these very concepts are co-opted to speed up transformations and wind up corrupted in themselves. Yet here, Sebatian and Taylor turn the tables on their corrupter, outright turn into something else, make their corrupter their asset, and are now planning to take over hell. Which you know...fair- it's deliciously ironic but fitting that the demons find love and positive emotional connections besides temporary lust perverse- but as Sebastian and Taylor would likely put it- isn't being perverse all that demons are about? They just took that with their own spin, and I love their wit in this. Granted, there is the aspect that Taylor is kind of very open to corrupting others- there was slight resistance to this that kind of went away- but considering he offered Taylor a choice and the fact that their humanity is to a degree intact hopefully he doesn't go nuts. Additionally, he is more pleasure oriented now, so I can kind of see why he thinks that- at the same time, that would possibly be a death of identity issue if he make anybody he converts into a normal demon rather than a nephilim. On the other hand, I could see him rationalizing being a nephilim as great and thus offering it to others would be completely fine- so long as it's their version that goes around (nephilim). Taylor seems to kind of be an exception to certain things now. I don't think that Taylor is sinister, but he (and taylor) are different than they were before- though different enough from most demons and likely more human- hence their nephilim status. Seeing their conquest in hell- and possibly going back to the realm of the living is a fascinating mental exercise in light of this. In light of the question that you mentioned in your summary- perhaps it's both. Taylor and Sebastian turn the tables on Dez because of their love for each other- if it hadn't been for that- they both would have lost their humanity entirely. On the other hand, love and feelings of affection between individuals can very much translate into feeling greater desire and lust for the other party. This is a case to case basis of course- but for these two- it very much was- and is- both.

10/16/24, 2:22 PM
@Anon > This is a case to case basis of course- but for these two- it very much was- and is- both. Exactly what I was trying to convey. :) And to your point about how corrupted are the boys? Well, future chapters will explore that. After all, they aren't humans with magic powers, they are half-humans, half-demons. Are they sinful or sweet? Or both. :wink:
10/12/24, 3:10 PM
Welcome back! Many loads have missed you the last few weeks.

10/16/24, 2:17 PM
@[Dishrag](/user/show/228300) Thank you! Yeah, I needed a few weeks to recharge, but now I have at least 3 more story chapters to release over the next few weeks, a 2nd chapter to this, and 2 of the 3 endings to "Did you hypnotize me." Working on getting the 3rd and final alternate ending to that story now.
10/12/24, 4:40 PM
I saw the author, I saw the premise, I knew it was gonna be an all-time favorite. Thanks for sharing. What a slam dunk.

10/16/24, 2:16 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Thank you. This was just one of those ideas that appeared in my head and I had to write. Total detour from what I planned to write for the Halloween contest, but I can save that story for next year :)
10/16/24, 7:28 AM
I'm going to be thinking about this story for a loooong time, I think. Great twist on demons/corruption and very in-line with the themes you often explore, as well as an extremely sexy read. Congratulations on giving me a new wank fantasy: Seb and Te's seductive adventures in the supernatural world.

10/16/24, 2:14 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) Thank you, sir. I am happy to report that there will be more chapters of this story, and I have finished Chapter 2 in time to be published before Halloween, but you will have to wait to get Seb and Te'lor's underworld exploits. We take a brief detour to Earth first, with Chapters 3 and 4 planned to be hellbound...
10/16/24, 12:18 PM
hKeep thee stories coming GoodBoy. I'm enjoying this series. Wish I could find a Halloween party where my deep down fantasies come true.
10/16/24, 10:12 AM
Are you still writing?
10/16/24, 9:34 AM
Amazing one!
10/16/24, 8:58 AM
Would love a continuation with more greed and dominance
10/16/24, 8:32 AM
Love where this is going