Recent Comments

11/7/18, 9:00 PM
I certainly enjoyed the changes in the story, though I will admit that it felt a bit all over the place at times, though I suppose that could've been the purpose since it did become a moshpit. :3 Regardless, a fun read!
11/7/18, 8:37 PM
Looks like a reporter is on the chopping block next, I am eager to see how this continues, and I'm also glad to see Jake finally succumb. :D
Anonymous
11/7/18, 8:27 PM
quite so. I'll adjust that
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/7/18, 8:14 PM
can you continue this story? please?
11/7/18, 8:11 PM
loved it
11/7/18, 8:07 PM
would love to watch a movie with this theme
11/7/18, 8:03 PM
I would some more stories with this world
11/7/18, 7:14 PM
Love it! Thanks for writing this sequel from the test subjects' perspective! Just one editing note, though: the 4th and 5th paragraphs (and a few of the final paragraphs) suddenly shift from 3rd person to 1st person narration.
Martin
11/7/18, 6:14 PM
Wow... I am totally mind-blown by this story. I never knew that there were such diamonds on this site. This story is exceptional, outstanding and special. Nothing to jerk off to, only slightly sexual, but so strong and deep. The first time I even felt my eyes getting wet reading one of our stories Thank you Fahrenheit, if you should ever read this!
Martin
11/7/18, 4:27 PM
Very well written and very intriguing beginning... Looking forward to read which way this will head!