Recent Comments

11/7/18, 2:52 AM
I wish it had more chapters, it was really well done and had a future...
dsull96@aol.com
11/7/18, 2:35 AM
loved it!!!
axis4320@yahoo.co.uk
11/7/18, 12:31 AM
great story and it was nice to have a slow count down and then a deep need to please, Sir and drink plenty of water, ready to read more
Anonymous
11/7/18, 12:23 AM
I CHOKED
UchihaDEMS
11/6/18, 11:16 PM
A nice daddy pig in his right place.
Anonymous
11/6/18, 10:39 PM
fuck! that dad is so hot. I wanna know what Mr Miller looks like and see how he gets put to his place as well please .
Anonymous
11/6/18, 5:44 PM
Like it , but felt total conversion was over the top; just turning them into studs would have done it for me. But I guess that defeats the point of the story. Love your writing.
anonymous4ox
11/6/18, 5:21 PM
Thanks for drawing to attention the mistakes I made. Guess that's what happens when you write in the middle of the night :p. Hopefully I've caught them all and this is a bit more readable now.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/6/18, 5:07 PM
thank you
11/6/18, 3:54 PM
Once you do some editing for spelling errors and paragraph breaks, this will be a great story. I hope you continue it and show what happens with Jake and Max.