Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/6/18, 5:44 PM
Like it , but felt total conversion was over the top; just turning them into studs would have done it for me. But I guess that defeats the point of the story. Love your writing.
anonymous4ox
11/6/18, 5:21 PM
Thanks for drawing to attention the mistakes I made. Guess that's what happens when you write in the middle of the night :p. Hopefully I've caught them all and this is a bit more readable now.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/6/18, 5:07 PM
thank you
11/6/18, 3:54 PM
Once you do some editing for spelling errors and paragraph breaks, this will be a great story. I hope you continue it and show what happens with Jake and Max.
11/6/18, 3:28 PM
@joaopomilio: I've written quite a few overtly political stories. "Justice is Served" was the really controversial one, but "Gerrymandering" and "A Hard Brexit" also make explicit references to US and UK politics.
Anonymous
11/6/18, 3:25 PM
Hot! Well-written!! Makes you want more!!
Willie Cici
11/6/18, 3:16 PM
I always check out your stories. You never disappoint. This was entertaining. Good job.
Anonymous
11/6/18, 3:09 PM
Another great story!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/6/18, 3:09 PM
what was the first "political" story?
Anonymous
11/6/18, 3:07 PM
Great, but a bit short :(