Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/6/18, 3:25 AM
Haha they're becoming Chezch for some reason!!? Weird but hot
Italianstalian
11/6/18, 1:34 AM
loved it!!!
11/6/18, 1:08 AM
Perfect! I loved it.
firesix
11/5/18, 9:44 PM
This has gotta be the best you've ever done!
Clownboi
11/5/18, 9:43 PM
hello everyone i really lost heart doing this and started to doubt myself, plus i had some personal issues. I have started back on it and have almost finished the next chapter. I will be posting once i have more than one chapter complete to avoid any comments about too long a delay thanks guys. Also just to wet your appetite did anyone remember the Ringmaster has a small box in his possession? its pretty important in his plans…
david
11/5/18, 9:22 PM
Hey Stroppy, Thanks so much for this *hot* story, and for your wonderful imagination and willingness to share with the rest of us. Thanks also for the extra effort you made to write it on an iPhone! Like Hypnothril, i would also love to see more. Sounds like he has some interesting ideas for additional detail. Meanwhile i am off to read more of your stories. This was my first and i am looking forward to reading others. Thx again! david
Stroppy
11/5/18, 7:22 PM
i'm a huge fan of yours and MALSKIN and a few others I'd love to see you re-write it and bring it to life. All of my writing is done from a hospital o on a small iPhone 6 frustrating to say the least
11/5/18, 7:14 PM
I think this story's got such a terrific premise, but it left me wanting more descriptions of the mental transformations and dumbing-down process. If you ever want to revisit the universe of this story, it would be so cool to retell it from the POV of one of the unwitting victims.
stroppy author
11/5/18, 7:10 PM
the others were gay. Were that I could give you the three minutes of your life back wasted on reading my story. AND THAT YOU ENDURED TO READ IT all the way through... you're a saint, sir. ... nawwww hell with that. BITE ME!
drgnawbones@gmail.com
11/5/18, 6:44 PM
You tagged this as gay to straight, but nothing like that happens. Also there are many, many errors.