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Anonymous
11/6/18, 2:27 PM
Suptiouly - I'm reading as sumptuously
Anonymous
11/6/18, 2:06 PM
great job
LongtimeFan
11/6/18, 12:40 PM
AAAAAANNNNNND I'm back! Another razor sharp satire from you, Hypnothrill! I remember learning in school that satire takes an idea exceptionally seriously, often to a ludicrous conclusion...this is spot-on! The crisis of the stereotypical Big Trump voter-- white American cisgender straight man--is a fear of vanishing, of being replaced, of losing identity...so what better way to satirize the idea by literally transforming those men into the very thing they fear will "replace" them? It's brilliant, it's poignant, and yes, even a bit sexy (though I don't use your more political stories to, ah...exercise my rights, shall we say?). Your work is truly one of a kind, Hypnothrill, and you will always be my favorite author here. Thanks for everything. :)
Anonymous
11/6/18, 12:38 PM
An old classic
LongtimeFan
11/6/18, 12:33 PM
As happened last time, I've hopped down here to comment before reading. SO EXCITED! This should be interesting...
Anonymous
11/6/18, 12:29 PM
Good fun
blankbot
11/6/18, 12:19 PM
Thanks. I needed that right now.
malskin
11/6/18, 11:51 AM
Loved it Thanks
11/6/18, 9:21 AM
I thought it was a good story liked how Eddie got caught up without him realizing it. for me it would have been good to read how the military man changed, maybe he still partly clothed rushing back in and servicing you. Think there could be another part in you as it spreads. But well written - Thanks
Anonymous
11/6/18, 8:55 AM
Creditable effort, but I think a little more effort in editing is required (e.g., what is "suptiouly"?).