Recent Comments

11/4/18, 2:56 AM
I really am looking forward to the Bear adding Peter and Rhett to his den of Cubs. Would love to see the dynamics in the group of Cubs. We already know that Scott is the sub-Cub and Colin is his protective 'older brother' can't wait to see what roles the other two will fill and how the Bear will remake them to fit those roles, maybe one of them taking on the role of 'husband' to the Bear. Really good story! I'm a real fan of 'Bear Family Building' stories, of course, and really I kind of feel the Bear wants to be 'Daddy' for his Cubs. I get the feeling he's been alone long enough and wants some boys and maybe a mate to love.
screamingmoist
11/4/18, 2:51 AM
Thanks for the kind words everyone! Glad to hear people are enjoying it so far.
Kevin
11/4/18, 1:36 AM
Great story! Loved the twist at the end. I was rooting for Eddie all along and I got what I wanted, but the twist added a nice texture to the ending. Really exciting to read and the suspense had me constantly checking for the next installment. Very unique idea.
Anonymous
11/4/18, 1:22 AM
love this series. absolutely amazing. would love to read more about Mike's (now Derek's) spike - how big it is and what it looks like with Derek's tattoos. sounds like a much improved Mike ;-)
Anonymous
11/4/18, 12:51 AM
Love this story and looking forward to the next chapter...
transformheaven
11/4/18, 12:18 AM
A hot ending for a hot series thanks man!
11/3/18, 11:48 PM
Pretty dick move. Such a pretty dick move. Wonderful as always. :-)
Anonymous
11/3/18, 11:34 PM
A sexy story continued, but still in need of a good editor.
transformheaven
11/3/18, 10:18 PM
Thank you so much for your advice Martin! I tried editing it in so it'll hopefully look a bit better now :D
Martin
11/3/18, 10:06 PM
A *friendly* advice: Please use more paragraphs to make your story more readable. For example, if you have a conversation, you usually start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. And also, when describing something, each thought or scene should be a separate paragraph. Just makes it easier for the reader.