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Anonymous
11/4/18, 9:30 PM
Exciting muscle growth - need even more descriptions of the growth, particularly the butt and pecs. What will he find once he reaches the cologne company? What IS ths stuff? Did his partner leave the bottle for him? Lots of potential in this story!
Anonymous
11/4/18, 9:14 PM
Body transformation, mental rearranging and muscle growth - who could ask for anything more?
Nov 16, 2005
NACHONEITOR1
11/4/18, 8:21 PM
An amazing story, i would love find this kind of store in real life.
Anonymous
11/4/18, 7:02 PM
cursed games are always fun,but this story feels very rushed. slow down and explore the changes a bit, the players reactions and thoughts.
Nachoneitor01
11/4/18, 6:55 PM
I would love have this kind of luck.
Anonymous
11/4/18, 6:18 PM
Amazing story.
degoetz@yahoo.com
11/4/18, 4:34 PM
One of my favorite stories. Hope there's a part 3 one day. :)
Inkslave
11/4/18, 4:33 PM
great story. I'm glad Eddie made it, as the bulk of use readers seemed to want it to go that way. for thoughts of us that did not got Andrew. i will not lie i kinda want to see how Eddie adapts to his new life as a big muscular jock. i mean he already dealt with the issue of his neighbors say he was his ourselves cousin, but what about work. would love to see one more part where Eddie deals with that
malskin
11/4/18, 4:04 PM
O yes really enjoyed this story had the desired effect on me. i suppose for me i would have liked to see the reaction to the two new sons as they come to know their new Dads - more like this is needed on this site
blankbot
11/4/18, 4:00 PM
Great concept.