Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/4/18, 1:22 AM
love this series. absolutely amazing. would love to read more about Mike's (now Derek's) spike - how big it is and what it looks like with Derek's tattoos. sounds like a much improved Mike ;-)
Anonymous
11/4/18, 12:51 AM
Love this story and looking forward to the next chapter...
transformheaven
11/4/18, 12:18 AM
A hot ending for a hot series thanks man!
11/3/18, 11:48 PM
Pretty dick move. Such a pretty dick move. Wonderful as always. :-)
Anonymous
11/3/18, 11:34 PM
A sexy story continued, but still in need of a good editor.
transformheaven
11/3/18, 10:18 PM
Thank you so much for your advice Martin! I tried editing it in so it'll hopefully look a bit better now :D
Martin
11/3/18, 10:06 PM
A *friendly* advice: Please use more paragraphs to make your story more readable. For example, if you have a conversation, you usually start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. And also, when describing something, each thought or scene should be a separate paragraph. Just makes it easier for the reader.
ForgottenCradle
11/3/18, 9:54 PM
Have to agree with Hypnothrill. amazing story. a little fast paced wanted to see the video the dads watched and maybe we can get the policemen someday?
Stormbound
11/3/18, 5:45 PM
Hot ending! I'm so glad Eddie made it, even with that weasel Matt trying to take revenge. I'm glad Eddie decided to keep Andrew locked and not let Andy come back. It's a bit sad that he'll be locked from now on, but without his brains he's such a perfect bottom boy that I doubt it'll matter too much. I wonder what he would've chosen if Eddie had asked him though. I'd like to think he would've given up his brains for his bros anyways :)
Anonymous
11/3/18, 4:28 PM
Nice job on this series! Looking forward to the next one.