Recent Comments

Martin
11/3/18, 10:06 PM
A *friendly* advice: Please use more paragraphs to make your story more readable. For example, if you have a conversation, you usually start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. And also, when describing something, each thought or scene should be a separate paragraph. Just makes it easier for the reader.
ForgottenCradle
11/3/18, 9:54 PM
Have to agree with Hypnothrill. amazing story. a little fast paced wanted to see the video the dads watched and maybe we can get the policemen someday?
Stormbound
11/3/18, 5:45 PM
Hot ending! I'm so glad Eddie made it, even with that weasel Matt trying to take revenge. I'm glad Eddie decided to keep Andrew locked and not let Andy come back. It's a bit sad that he'll be locked from now on, but without his brains he's such a perfect bottom boy that I doubt it'll matter too much. I wonder what he would've chosen if Eddie had asked him though. I'd like to think he would've given up his brains for his bros anyways :)
Anonymous
11/3/18, 4:28 PM
Nice job on this series! Looking forward to the next one.
Anonymous
11/3/18, 4:15 PM
i wish we got to see the actual mind controlling process that the dads went through. but nonetheless, the story was still hot as fuck. i always love your sweat and armpit stories. thi s is right up there with your submarine story
New Fan
11/3/18, 3:47 PM
Wow. This has been a real gem of a story to read. Would you consider a saga continuation. In some case, condition or curse, these newly created jocks are susceptible to a muscle-Boy-retro virus? They may loose their pheromones and newly endowed skills. I enjoy the play between characters. Many thanks.
Anonymous
11/3/18, 2:34 PM
I came like six times with this series! super hot, well written, great story.
Anonymous
11/3/18, 1:56 PM
Thanks A terrific story Excellent
Anonymous
11/3/18, 12:57 PM
the name tags, the resistance genuinely drives me crazy i love these !! excellently written
Midtownnavyguy
11/3/18, 9:41 AM
original, erotic, satisfying! WANT MORE.