Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
11/1/18, 7:40 AM
Phenomenal stuff! The transformations were uber-hot, but it's the characterization and writing that make this such a great tale. Love how you paint each character with such amazing details, and bring them to life (plus both monsters sound horrific). Thank you!
Marktree6
11/1/18, 6:25 AM
Always love your stories. It would be great if you wrote one about a guy transforming loads of random individuals. I was hoping Todd would start changing random guys from his street and work. But great story
Anonymous
11/1/18, 4:30 AM
when will part 2 be out?
11/1/18, 4:25 AM
[Spoiler Alert] Great scary story and transformations. I was hoping that David became the Alpha not Brad. Much more to come I hope.
Anonymous
11/1/18, 1:08 AM
The writing can be a little hard to follow at times, but I still love this word you've created. Lots of stories out there about characters being dominated and feminized, not enough about the characters becoming powerful and godly!
Marktree6
10/31/18, 11:38 PM
Loved the mix of thrill, spook & transformation!
Anonymous
10/31/18, 10:56 PM
What will happen to the other dads
10/31/18, 10:32 PM
You'll be seeing more of that dynamic in the second half of the story. Chris' changes were mostly mental and we didn't really have room to explore them a lot in part 1. ;3
Anonymous
10/31/18, 10:13 PM
damn, nice!! quick update too! make some slaves please!!
Anonymous
10/31/18, 9:48 PM
Would love to hear and see more developments,masculine feminised guys are hot so would love to see this develped even further,loving the writing and style here