Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/1/18, 7:24 PM
I really enjoyed reading this story so far, even though I am not a foot fetishist. I like the fact that compared to other stories here in this on-line library is that it is realistic, and so the “suspension of disbelief” is not out there and you can really be or into the characters in the story. Often the people write here is an of a twenty-something twink who has the most perfect body without an inch of fat and an imaginary lifestyle, which makes it difficult to engage in the story. It would be wonderful if more writers could make up things that were a little more realistic and takes them on a journey. Well done, and really looking forward to the story.
Anonymous
11/1/18, 6:48 PM
interesting :)
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/1/18, 6:20 PM
Am almost expecting him to pass out, exhausted & wake up in them. Love idea of somebody slipping me into their underwear when I'm sleeping.
ForgottenCradle
11/1/18, 4:11 PM
the spelling errors weren't that bad. I have to agree that I was confused when the narrators switched,but it was nothing too bad. all in all a good start for a story ...and this may be my ultimate fantasy I just found...
LongtimeFan
11/1/18, 7:40 AM
Phenomenal stuff! The transformations were uber-hot, but it's the characterization and writing that make this such a great tale. Love how you paint each character with such amazing details, and bring them to life (plus both monsters sound horrific). Thank you!
Marktree6
11/1/18, 6:25 AM
Always love your stories. It would be great if you wrote one about a guy transforming loads of random individuals. I was hoping Todd would start changing random guys from his street and work. But great story
Anonymous
11/1/18, 4:30 AM
when will part 2 be out?
11/1/18, 4:25 AM
[Spoiler Alert] Great scary story and transformations. I was hoping that David became the Alpha not Brad. Much more to come I hope.
Anonymous
11/1/18, 1:08 AM
The writing can be a little hard to follow at times, but I still love this word you've created. Lots of stories out there about characters being dominated and feminized, not enough about the characters becoming powerful and godly!
Marktree6
10/31/18, 11:38 PM
Loved the mix of thrill, spook & transformation!