Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/1/18, 4:30 AM
when will part 2 be out?
11/1/18, 4:25 AM
[Spoiler Alert] Great scary story and transformations. I was hoping that David became the Alpha not Brad. Much more to come I hope.
Anonymous
11/1/18, 1:08 AM
The writing can be a little hard to follow at times, but I still love this word you've created. Lots of stories out there about characters being dominated and feminized, not enough about the characters becoming powerful and godly!
Marktree6
10/31/18, 11:38 PM
Loved the mix of thrill, spook & transformation!
Anonymous
10/31/18, 10:56 PM
What will happen to the other dads
10/31/18, 10:32 PM
You'll be seeing more of that dynamic in the second half of the story. Chris' changes were mostly mental and we didn't really have room to explore them a lot in part 1. ;3
Anonymous
10/31/18, 10:13 PM
damn, nice!! quick update too! make some slaves please!!
Anonymous
10/31/18, 9:48 PM
Would love to hear and see more developments,masculine feminised guys are hot so would love to see this develped even further,loving the writing and style here
tomozco
10/31/18, 9:33 PM
Thanks for the comments, guys! Appreciate your feedback. I'm still slowly working towards the next parts, so stay tuned! ;)
Oct 24, 2018
Daniel
10/31/18, 8:42 PM
IMAGINATIVELY DONE!! I?J?S?