Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:14 AM
Every time you switch speakers, you need to start a new paragraph.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:13 AM
please continue
10/31/18, 2:31 AM
Excellent
UchihaDEMS
10/31/18, 2:24 AM
Despite the bad spelling, the story is so damn hot. I mean, geez, I LOVE IT. It has almost everything I like (except for feet). Hot dads turned into slaves for youngsters. Its so rare to see this kind of stories. Change his perception and think whatever you want or the fact to made them oblivious This one made me happy in so many levels ;) I do hope to see more. Like, what Jamie would do to his slave dad. We could also see some other kind point of view like each friend with his experiences. This story has so much potential. Keep it up!
dsull96@aol.com
10/31/18, 12:18 AM
The spelling errors make the story hard to read, even your response needs work i didn't give it a good rating for that reason. maybe if you fix it up i'll take another look.
10/30/18, 11:04 PM
sorry everyone idk why it posted like this will fix after I get off work.
Anonymous
10/30/18, 9:59 PM
please go through and fix the spelling errors there is so many
Mutabear
10/30/18, 8:21 PM
Amazing.  More jocks need to get hairy!
Thegreatstoryteller
10/30/18, 8:15 PM
brilliant! i really love the idea of celebrity bottles existing in the world! not to mention that professional actors could be using MARIPOSA to be playing a character 
10/30/18, 1:24 PM
Unless it was unconscious, it wasn't a Tennessee Williams reference.