Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/31/18, 4:36 AM
I agree with Darmani, Bill deserves at least one win. I still love the story, and I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 4:06 AM
I agree that it's one HOT story !
10/31/18, 3:54 AM
Fixed it. Will take some time to get up. Didn't know what I had to do.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:51 AM
Holy shit, please separate into paragraphs its really hard to read.  This one sounds hot too, please fix D:
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:14 AM
Every time you switch speakers, you need to start a new paragraph.
Anonymous
10/31/18, 3:13 AM
please continue
10/31/18, 2:31 AM
Excellent
UchihaDEMS
10/31/18, 2:24 AM
Despite the bad spelling, the story is so damn hot. I mean, geez, I LOVE IT. It has almost everything I like (except for feet). Hot dads turned into slaves for youngsters. Its so rare to see this kind of stories. Change his perception and think whatever you want or the fact to made them oblivious This one made me happy in so many levels ;) I do hope to see more. Like, what Jamie would do to his slave dad. We could also see some other kind point of view like each friend with his experiences. This story has so much potential. Keep it up!
dsull96@aol.com
10/31/18, 12:18 AM
The spelling errors make the story hard to read, even your response needs work i didn't give it a good rating for that reason. maybe if you fix it up i'll take another look.
10/30/18, 11:04 PM
sorry everyone idk why it posted like this will fix after I get off work.