Recent Comments

Oct 24, 2018
Tommie
10/24/18, 5:14 PM
Amazing idea and progression from the festival. :)
Oct 24, 2018
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
10/24/18, 4:22 PM
Should be a magic suit, so after a number of uses, it fuses to his body
Oct 24, 2018
10/24/18, 3:12 PM
Interesting very interesting.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:51 PM
I had to go back and read Ch. 1 and 2 again to get a sense of continuity. It's not there, but it doesn't undermine the story. Keep going. I'm intrigued.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:37 PM
Great start! Can't wait for the next installment.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:30 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:30 PM
Always a treat when you post a story, Nicky. >:)
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:21 PM
Don't rush this story! There's so much to ferment and develop. It can be really hot. These two chapters were great and I loved them. The next can be really hot. You also may want to spend a little more time editing. There are some glaring errors, but they are easily fixable with spell check and grammar check. It takes two minutes. It will make your story even better.
Oct 24, 2018
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:18 PM
I'm enjoying this influx of semifurry content.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 2:14 PM
Agreed. Great story, as always!