Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/23/18, 3:29 AM
So hot ! can you make a beary construction guy into a fagslut. make him feminine and crave cock. And another one a fagtoilet. he will be ask for shit and piss from his coworkers
BigMAss
10/23/18, 3:28 AM
Could use a transformation !
Anonymous
10/23/18, 3:06 AM
Off to a good start. It should be an interesting visit !
LongtimeFan
10/23/18, 1:40 AM
AWOOGA! Amazing beginning to your first story! The descriptions of the guys are top notch (the image of hugely buff, dimwitted guys literally tearing out of their clothes....mmmmmmm), and the pace is just right. You're a natural! :D
dsull96@aol.com
10/23/18, 1:34 AM
I loved it. I was hard almost from the beginning . i'm envious of christian, id love to be in that position. i'm hoping that there will be more especially payback on sven the creep.
Anonymous
10/23/18, 12:24 AM
Pierce is an arrogant POS and needs to be humbled.
LongtimeFan
10/22/18, 11:26 PM
Fantastic! Even though this was the "exposition" chapter, I love how you still made it into a character study of Pierce as well. You truly are one of the best writers on this site. :) And hooray for your mantra! I feel safer about Todd now. Can't wait to see what happens next...but take your time writing! Do what YOU like at your own pace. You'll always have at least one reader!
Jim
10/22/18, 11:08 PM
Wish there was more
Anonymous
10/22/18, 10:32 PM
really good please do more. also this site was never about just mind control fuck that guy dont listen to him
10/22/18, 10:26 PM
My motto as a writer: No Character Left Behind. I knew this was going to be a heavy exposition chapter -- it's basically a two-man one-act play -- but this seemed like a logical place to break it before the action of Day 3 really kicks in.