Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
10/22/18, 11:26 PM
Fantastic! Even though this was the "exposition" chapter, I love how you still made it into a character study of Pierce as well. You truly are one of the best writers on this site. :) And hooray for your mantra! I feel safer about Todd now. Can't wait to see what happens next...but take your time writing! Do what YOU like at your own pace. You'll always have at least one reader!
Jim
10/22/18, 11:08 PM
Wish there was more
Anonymous
10/22/18, 10:32 PM
really good please do more. also this site was never about just mind control fuck that guy dont listen to him
10/22/18, 10:26 PM
My motto as a writer: No Character Left Behind. I knew this was going to be a heavy exposition chapter -- it's basically a two-man one-act play -- but this seemed like a logical place to break it before the action of Day 3 really kicks in.
Anonymous
10/22/18, 10:17 PM
What a great story Excellent work Thanks
nycboot
10/22/18, 8:56 PM
...and please don't forget Todd. :)
beard_ed@yahoo.com
10/22/18, 8:15 PM
Another vote for a beard, or one of those awesome hoseshoe mustache and beard combos.
Anonymous
10/22/18, 6:49 PM
Always come to this story if I'm looking for a quick jerk!! Love it!!!
Anonymous
10/22/18, 6:45 PM
love this story, wish I could get some of that beer!!!
Anonymous
10/22/18, 6:43 PM
Cant wait for the next chapter! Where can i buy those slipys? :D