Recent Comments

Baller
10/13/24, 8:03 PM
Best bodyswap scenario I’ve ever read. And this is not an easy topic to work through believably. I love how you switched it back and forth and kept me guessing. Really a top notch job. Very well written and smokin hot.

10/15/24, 9:51 AM
@Baller Thanks Baller. I appreciate that.
Anonymous
10/12/24, 7:13 PM
Perfection. 🦴

10/15/24, 9:50 AM
@Anonymous Thanks, buddy.
10/12/24, 6:30 PM
So Hot, always love the tiny chastity details! Really hoping you'll continue this one!

10/15/24, 9:50 AM
@[Collegedb](/user/show/2218061) Thanks CB. More to come.
Oct 14, 2024
10/15/24, 9:29 AM
Verry nice!
Anonymous
10/15/24, 7:14 AM
Great work , I would love if Desmond and Grux to have an actual cute and consental relationship
Oct 14, 2024
10/15/24, 6:38 AM
This is itching something I didn't know I needed scratched!
HypnoMutt
10/15/24, 5:45 AM
Hey, bud, you still out there? :) Wrangling an epic like this is challenging at best, and when your richly drawn characters are demanding plotlines and story arcs of their own... I'm a playwright/composer in the middle of a long project and can relate to working through blocks. It's daunting, and it doesn't matter if you're dry as a bone or if there's a basket full of research, notes, and ideas on the table. That said, I want you to know that this story stays vivid in my memory; I think it's one of the most fully realized on the site. Like many of us, I'd love to see you take it forward if and when the spirit moves you. And even if you're done with this tale, I'll happily read anything else you choose to share; your voice and vision are compelling. Thanks, mister, and may the Muse clear a path for you.
Anonymous
10/15/24, 5:33 AM
Are updates going to be every two weeks again?
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10/15/24, 4:42 AM
Great work! I do agree the dialogue was a bit stuff, but it was still really hot! I’d love to see Desmond confess to Grux if you decide to continue the series
Kbl32
10/15/24, 3:07 AM
Awesome story! Please keep it going!🤪