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Anonymous
10/19/18, 5:02 AM
"I shook my head. That was ridiculous. I went to college for less than a year before I dropped out. There was too much ass to fuck with my giant cock. There was no point in learning when you were this young and pretty." Oh FUCK yes. A masterpiece!
david
10/19/18, 4:56 AM
OMG that was so *hot*!! i was so into Simon's head that i felt his submissive stupor enhanced by the alcohol. i almost fainted myself when Hank suggested licking his pec, after Simon had unwittingly cuddled into Hank's side. Then, again without thinking he started to lick Hank's sweaty muscles and suck in his pheromones, sinking even deeper into a submissive haze. i have to say i think that tag #straight to gay is incorrectly applied to this story. Simon may have thought he was straight, but there's just no way. He just needed Hank to open his mind. i was disappointed that i wasn't actually in that room with Hank instead of Simon. After that, i was also disappointed that you haven't written more stories. i have to admit i gave the story a mid range for "mind control", but only because it was more a case of mindless lack of control on Simon's part. Happily, Hank didn't back down from the opportunity to dominate, and Simon's loss of control was totally *hot*. Thanks so much for this one! Looking forward to more.
10/19/18, 1:42 AM
Absolutely loved this one! Very hot.
ed2you2@gmail.com
10/19/18, 1:26 AM
Rushing to the next chapter. Liking the feel
Anonymous
10/18/18, 10:34 PM
Fucking excellent. Love this kind of transformation
Cubwriter30
10/18/18, 9:42 PM
This is my favorite story on here. SO Good!
Mutabear
10/18/18, 9:34 PM
that that was well written and very hot. Hopefully swallowing that much jock cream gives him a nice little Potbelly.
Anonymous
10/18/18, 6:57 PM
I like the fagbaby idea. Diapers, pacifiers, and baby talk.
Rodready
10/18/18, 6:41 PM
Derek's on a roll.
LongtimeFan
10/18/18, 6:07 PM
INCREDIBLE! So glad you're back on a creative kick, Derek. This is an amazing story--love the images you paint of gorgeous hunks making out/fooling around, and Cole's slow transformation into a mindless musclehead. Thanks for the great time! ;D