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Mikelg
10/16/18, 10:37 AM
it's a lovely story, thanks :)
AeonFlux
10/16/18, 9:22 AM
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10/16/18, 5:11 AM
I bloody loved it.!
Anonymous
10/16/18, 3:00 AM
Sure would love an entire chapter just on Wyatt's self-debasement stories ;) Otherwise, great story with great ending
bikerbro
10/16/18, 2:53 AM
A great concept, and an appropriately spoopy aesthetic! I just wish the end result was more extreme, and they weren't as accepting - it never sits right with me to establish a revenge plot, especially with themes/extremes like this, then have the host accept them into their everyday lives with minimal consequence. The TFs themselves were hot, and loved the concept of the antagonist toying with them from afar, but the ending fell flat for me. Would love to see more of this nature, though.
Anonymous
10/15/18, 11:26 PM
Spectacular
Anonymous
10/15/18, 6:53 PM
Delicious, humiliating, and perfectly spooky.
nycboot
10/15/18, 6:42 PM
By the middle, I found this very scary. You really created a sinister and horrifying mood! I thought the four would get a heavier dose of revenge, but it was an alright ending.
10/15/18, 5:33 PM
Please continue!
10/15/18, 5:26 PM
So many devious plans and transformations! Super!