Recent Comments

nycboot
10/15/18, 1:50 PM
I'm so into this story a tear actually welled up in my eye when I read the portion where Charlie asks Todd the probing question. Maybe Charles can give Todd (I liked the name Iowa more :) ) a half-bottle of the Mariposa? :)
ForgottenCradle
10/15/18, 1:39 PM
I agree to the grown men comment. Good start,really thrilled to see where this goes
UchihaDEMS
10/15/18, 1:15 AM
An interesting concept, lets see where you take this to. I'm glad you picked grown up men, very different too!
10/15/18, 12:31 AM
Lots of fun!
Crane
10/14/18, 11:52 PM
This is my favourite story on this site. I've probably read it about 12 times since it was published! My only complaint is that the author doesn't have any other stories, and I would love to read more of his work. It's very well written, the setup is very nice, and watching Gardener descend into debauchery was extremely satisfying.
Oct 13, 2018
Anonymous
10/14/18, 10:19 PM
This is FANTASTIC!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/14/18, 6:03 PM
two stories dripping with potential, I like them a
10/14/18, 5:45 PM
Both would make great longer stories! The shorter versions make good vignettes as they are. You could add more scenes with different locations and transformations. You could have a series of scenes or you could do a back story. Some of the character's history and past transformations or his origins. Please continue writing.
10/14/18, 5:22 PM
Loved it! The slow change of reality and growth of his friend were awesome!
Oct 13, 2018
10/14/18, 2:32 PM
I'm always excited to read something new from you. This is hot! Nice and drawn out, with the perfect tempo. I really like that the bartender seemed to know what the doll was.