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10/14/18, 5:45 PM
Both would make great longer stories! The shorter versions make good vignettes as they are. You could add more scenes with different locations and transformations. You could have a series of scenes or you could do a back story. Some of the character's history and past transformations or his origins. Please continue writing.
10/14/18, 5:22 PM
Loved it! The slow change of reality and growth of his friend were awesome!
Oct 13, 2018
10/14/18, 2:32 PM
I'm always excited to read something new from you. This is hot! Nice and drawn out, with the perfect tempo. I really like that the bartender seemed to know what the doll was.
Anonymous
10/14/18, 12:06 PM
These straight2Us are really good. You should make more
Oct 13, 2018
10/14/18, 2:01 AM
Really hot slow changes! It got me going!
Anonymous
10/13/18, 11:31 PM
Interesting - the narrator is under the mind control of the bro Kurt in the goldenrod colored tanktop but he doesn't know it. Neither do you, until almost the end of the story - hot!!
Anonymous
10/13/18, 10:53 PM
Awesome story loved it. Please do a part 2.
Anonymous
10/13/18, 9:40 PM
can you continue this, please?
10/13/18, 7:34 PM
Nice idea. Though it is sad the father doesn't let his sin enjoy the fruits of the labor. Hehe
david
10/13/18, 7:29 PM
Very hot! i want my Master to have this kind of power (except maybe with "take-backs")!