Recent Comments

10/13/18, 7:34 PM
Nice idea. Though it is sad the father doesn't let his sin enjoy the fruits of the labor. Hehe
david
10/13/18, 7:29 PM
Very hot! i want my Master to have this kind of power (except maybe with "take-backs")!
AeonFlux
10/13/18, 6:26 PM
More,
Anonymous
10/13/18, 6:05 PM
A dumb punk AND a dumb jock, both excellently written? Great and hot stuff, super excited to see where this is going!
Anonymous
10/13/18, 2:29 PM
more!
David
10/13/18, 1:26 PM
HOT!
blueron
10/13/18, 12:26 PM
my favorite story , very hot !
Anonymous
10/13/18, 7:07 AM
Great story -- just way too short!
bikerbro
10/13/18, 4:17 AM
I don't think I've read a hotter punk transformation than what Derek's going through - the dumbing down, loss of vocabulary, the accent, attitude, aesthetic...God, it's perfect. You got a gift, man.
10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!