Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/13/18, 7:07 AM
Great story -- just way too short!
bikerbro
10/13/18, 4:17 AM
I don't think I've read a hotter punk transformation than what Derek's going through - the dumbing down, loss of vocabulary, the accent, attitude, aesthetic...God, it's perfect. You got a gift, man.
10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Sep 17, 2018
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
10/12/18, 9:40 PM
Agree with the comments above: great story and great build up want to read more
Anonymous
10/12/18, 9:35 PM
This story is making me really sad but also hot at the same time... it's conflicting. I hope things do end up working out for Chuck and Derek.
10/12/18, 9:23 PM
wish I could find a guy like this for fun with me!!
10/12/18, 9:21 PM
wonder whereI I can by a pair of these???
10/12/18, 3:55 PM
Wow this is moving toward an interesting conclusion. Please continue.
10/12/18, 3:46 PM
Thrilled to see this story highlighted in today's archival selection, with great gradual changes, physically and mentally. One of my favorites from Derek!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 3:34 PM
Slipping further into the headspace of a dumb punk...love it!