Recent Comments

10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Sep 17, 2018
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
10/12/18, 9:40 PM
Agree with the comments above: great story and great build up want to read more
Anonymous
10/12/18, 9:35 PM
This story is making me really sad but also hot at the same time... it's conflicting. I hope things do end up working out for Chuck and Derek.
10/12/18, 9:23 PM
wish I could find a guy like this for fun with me!!
10/12/18, 9:21 PM
wonder whereI I can by a pair of these???
10/12/18, 3:55 PM
Wow this is moving toward an interesting conclusion. Please continue.
10/12/18, 3:46 PM
Thrilled to see this story highlighted in today's archival selection, with great gradual changes, physically and mentally. One of my favorites from Derek!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 3:34 PM
Slipping further into the headspace of a dumb punk...love it!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 1:30 PM
I'd love to see a mariposa story where one of the bottles turns the guy into someone with a phimosis foreskinned cock, a tight foreskin suddenly that they have to learn to navigate! Or conversely, an uncut guy becoming cut and needing to figure out the new sensations!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 1:07 PM
Great story. I hope there's more fun with Carson