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Anonymous
10/10/18, 11:26 PM
Satire -- as American as apple pie. I loved it.
Oct 6, 2018
Anonymous
10/10/18, 11:06 PM
Would love if you made versions of these stories in the hypo'd POV as well! You're so talented.
tomozco
10/10/18, 10:37 PM
Very cool idea! Nice, short and sweet story, straight to the point, but still gives a good description of the slow transformation and subtle control. Hot!
Daniel
10/10/18, 7:37 PM
SOOOOO HOT! Making lt more about the seduction and corruption of the dad really worked! Just wish he could' ve gone to the garage and enslaved a hunky, straight mechanic.... I.J.S.
Anonymous
10/10/18, 5:08 PM
Loved this!!!
LongtimeFan
10/10/18, 12:15 PM
Great story! Love the Shakespeare reference at the end. And I found it oddly sweet that the whole thing was arranged by Julian's mom...even dark sorceresses love their kids! :)
Anonymous
10/10/18, 7:53 AM
Thank you! i love the story. Since i am interested in hypnosis and practice regularly, i was particularly interested in your description of the mind control/hypnosis methods. i tried the spiral and was quite surprised at how quickly one could be drawn into its patterns. It was great. However in reality i doubt this one spiral even with the drugs would have been enough to gain that much control that quickly. It might have been good to at least make reference to recorded audio scripts in Randy's voice for induction, setting triggers, and D/s training, and increase the time and number of hypnosis sessions. It was in any case a hot story, which i enjoyed. Thanks again.
10/10/18, 1:32 AM
Just another great story from Edlam!!!! That's why is one of my favorite authors ^ ^
Anonymous
10/9/18, 8:49 PM
Nice! How about a sequel hypnotizing the stepfather?
Anonymous
10/9/18, 3:07 PM
Always enjoy seeing football players in MC stories. Nothing beats mind-fucking muscular young/old men.