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Anonymous
10/10/18, 5:08 PM
Loved this!!!
LongtimeFan
10/10/18, 12:15 PM
Great story! Love the Shakespeare reference at the end. And I found it oddly sweet that the whole thing was arranged by Julian's mom...even dark sorceresses love their kids! :)
Anonymous
10/10/18, 7:53 AM
Thank you! i love the story. Since i am interested in hypnosis and practice regularly, i was particularly interested in your description of the mind control/hypnosis methods. i tried the spiral and was quite surprised at how quickly one could be drawn into its patterns. It was great. However in reality i doubt this one spiral even with the drugs would have been enough to gain that much control that quickly. It might have been good to at least make reference to recorded audio scripts in Randy's voice for induction, setting triggers, and D/s training, and increase the time and number of hypnosis sessions. It was in any case a hot story, which i enjoyed. Thanks again.
10/10/18, 1:32 AM
Just another great story from Edlam!!!! That's why is one of my favorite authors ^ ^
Anonymous
10/9/18, 8:49 PM
Nice! How about a sequel hypnotizing the stepfather?
Anonymous
10/9/18, 3:07 PM
Always enjoy seeing football players in MC stories. Nothing beats mind-fucking muscular young/old men.
Anonymous
10/9/18, 2:40 PM
I enjoy Larry's conflicting thoughts a lot, it speaks human. I was hoping for more Ben, or have the entire football team somehow join the play, but the story is awesome as it is. :3
Jun 22, 2006
Anonymous
10/9/18, 11:34 AM
It was really good
rubaluva
10/9/18, 3:35 AM
This story is amazing. I am so looking forward to reading more! I hope you find time to add to it :)
Anonymous
10/9/18, 1:53 AM
Whether it's a stand-alone story or one of your series, your writing pushes all the right buttons for me. Glad to see you back, Edlam. Awesome writing!