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david
10/11/18, 5:46 AM
Wow! Great story. Like you, i love to read about subs like me being totally dominated by a hot man! My hot men can be young and thin, 30's and muscular, or considerably older. In fact it's not their age, or their build, so much as their charisma and sense of control, their strength of mind. The excitement is generated for me by the circumstances and the Dominant's increasing control and power over the sub -- my uncontrollable loss of power to this other man or men. You certainly created a series of circumstances under which the central character is overwhelmed by others over and over, first angry, rebellious, then submitting to his circumstances, less and less control with more and more pleasure. Finally, his surrender, as he becomes infatuated with his purpose and the ecstatic pleasure he gets from serving his purpose, and begins to love being controlled and providing others with pleasure. Thanks so much. i will certainly be checking out your other stories. david
UchihaDEMS
10/10/18, 11:50 PM
I loved it. Thanks for this awesome work. The happy ending made it even better.
Anonymous
10/10/18, 11:26 PM
Satire -- as American as apple pie. I loved it.
Oct 6, 2018
Anonymous
10/10/18, 11:06 PM
Would love if you made versions of these stories in the hypo'd POV as well! You're so talented.
tomozco
10/10/18, 10:37 PM
Very cool idea! Nice, short and sweet story, straight to the point, but still gives a good description of the slow transformation and subtle control. Hot!
Daniel
10/10/18, 7:37 PM
SOOOOO HOT! Making lt more about the seduction and corruption of the dad really worked! Just wish he could' ve gone to the garage and enslaved a hunky, straight mechanic.... I.J.S.
Anonymous
10/10/18, 5:08 PM
Loved this!!!
LongtimeFan
10/10/18, 12:15 PM
Great story! Love the Shakespeare reference at the end. And I found it oddly sweet that the whole thing was arranged by Julian's mom...even dark sorceresses love their kids! :)
Anonymous
10/10/18, 7:53 AM
Thank you! i love the story. Since i am interested in hypnosis and practice regularly, i was particularly interested in your description of the mind control/hypnosis methods. i tried the spiral and was quite surprised at how quickly one could be drawn into its patterns. It was great. However in reality i doubt this one spiral even with the drugs would have been enough to gain that much control that quickly. It might have been good to at least make reference to recorded audio scripts in Randy's voice for induction, setting triggers, and D/s training, and increase the time and number of hypnosis sessions. It was in any case a hot story, which i enjoyed. Thanks again.
10/10/18, 1:32 AM
Just another great story from Edlam!!!! That's why is one of my favorite authors ^ ^