Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/9/18, 2:40 PM
I enjoy Larry's conflicting thoughts a lot, it speaks human. I was hoping for more Ben, or have the entire football team somehow join the play, but the story is awesome as it is. :3
Jun 22, 2006
Anonymous
10/9/18, 11:34 AM
It was really good
rubaluva
10/9/18, 3:35 AM
This story is amazing. I am so looking forward to reading more! I hope you find time to add to it :)
Anonymous
10/9/18, 1:53 AM
Whether it's a stand-alone story or one of your series, your writing pushes all the right buttons for me. Glad to see you back, Edlam. Awesome writing!
Buffy67
10/8/18, 9:26 PM
I miss the twisted evil side of you . . But great story
Anonymous
10/8/18, 9:01 PM
amazing story Edlam! I've said it before and I'll say it again. I don't mind you taking your time with the other series as long as you keep writing. kisses from New Zealand
Anonymous
10/8/18, 8:38 PM
it was a beautiful story . enjoyed every minute of it. too only find a three some as nice as these three guys.
Anonymous
10/8/18, 8:18 PM
So hot!!!
Seamus
10/8/18, 7:06 PM
I love you're idea and what you're doing here. I have a big pit fetish, so would LOVE some description of the character growing out thick hair there too. ;)
10/8/18, 4:10 PM
Edlam, that sounds awesome and super cool. Thumbs up to you for that extension idea. It's now canon in my head. Hehe I especially like how he keeps Clint as well. Hehe Honestly it's a really great story, from start to finish. It is also quite complete so kudos to that.