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Anonymous
10/8/18, 9:01 PM
amazing story Edlam! I've said it before and I'll say it again. I don't mind you taking your time with the other series as long as you keep writing. kisses from New Zealand
Anonymous
10/8/18, 8:38 PM
it was a beautiful story . enjoyed every minute of it. too only find a three some as nice as these three guys.
Anonymous
10/8/18, 8:18 PM
So hot!!!
Seamus
10/8/18, 7:06 PM
I love you're idea and what you're doing here. I have a big pit fetish, so would LOVE some description of the character growing out thick hair there too. ;)
10/8/18, 4:10 PM
Edlam, that sounds awesome and super cool. Thumbs up to you for that extension idea. It's now canon in my head. Hehe I especially like how he keeps Clint as well. Hehe Honestly it's a really great story, from start to finish. It is also quite complete so kudos to that.
EdIam
10/8/18, 3:22 PM
I thought about making it slightly longer and explaining how Mark helped them get ingrained back into their lives, buy just seemed to stretch it rather than providing a satisfying ending. In my extension, Jack and Clint both get back into school the following semester, reform relationships, but remain Mark's hypno'd boyfriend and happy horny hypno toy.
10/8/18, 3:18 PM
The whole "we left school" thing is weird, as is "we cut ties with everyone" but beyond that what an interesting, fun, enjoyable, sexy story. Well done
Anonymous
10/8/18, 3:08 PM
That was truly beautiful ending
10/8/18, 2:18 PM
Wonderful story! I think there have been "revenge" stories in the past where I thought the punishment was much more extreme than the crime. But your writing made me identify so totally with Mark and feel his pain and hurt that*** anything*** he did to Jack seemed totally justified. You produced a happy conclusion which made it all the more fitting. Bravo!
ForgottenCradle
10/8/18, 11:08 AM
A happy end! *sobs* another outstanding piece by you,Edlam. I guess some of us were in a similar sitiation -without being able to mindcontrol someone- so Mark's actions are...well,not justified,but understandable. It's nice that he noticed that power corrupts and we got a happy ending to some degree. Oh yeah, great plot. Especially well written. You know,like always. That is all