Recent Comments

Crane
10/7/18, 9:30 AM
VERY creative way to go about story telling. I wish more authors did it this way.
Anonymous
10/7/18, 3:59 AM
Incredible story!! Subtle and wicked!!
Aug 23, 2018
Anonymous
10/7/18, 3:42 AM
go more
Joys of Oblivion
10/7/18, 3:20 AM
Great start and great inspiration pic. Could take it a little slower, and it would be even hotter from the stepbrother's perspective.
Sep 17, 2018
Anonymous
10/6/18, 9:53 PM
love the story. more please
10/6/18, 4:14 PM
Nice prologue and result. Now, can we see the build up. Hehe Good story. Really sexy.
Anonymous
10/6/18, 3:38 PM
I think this is more than a homage though
Apr 25, 2018
Anonymous
10/6/18, 3:16 PM
is part 2 coming along?!?
beard_ed@yahoo.com
10/6/18, 3:09 PM
Great addition. Is he going to let that 5 o'clock shadow grow by any chance. Hope you continue it.
David S
10/6/18, 11:20 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. Having the ability to stop time has always been one of my fantasies. I can't wait for more!