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Anonymous
10/7/18, 9:12 PM
This is definitely taken from the real -life story about the news anchor who became a porn star. The entire sentence at the end from Derek about not wanting to retire to board shorts is a direct quotation from the news anchor story. It shows that real life is stranger than fiction! Well written and totally believable!
Anonymous
10/7/18, 8:54 PM
I love the subtle humor in the writing: “You SURE things are totally okay between you and your ‘buddy’?” Derek shrugged off the damaged wall. “What, that? No, that’s…that’s nothing. He’s a…totally different person today.”
ForgottenCradle
10/7/18, 8:14 PM
that POV storytelling is certainly unique and I must say,I liked it great job,wanna see chapter 2
Anonymous
10/7/18, 7:01 PM
this is insanely hot. i keep coming back to wank over it more. can you please please please continue this
Anonymous
10/7/18, 4:24 PM
keep it going
jacobstone1980@gmailcom
10/7/18, 2:17 PM
please email
Crane
10/7/18, 9:30 AM
VERY creative way to go about story telling. I wish more authors did it this way.
Anonymous
10/7/18, 3:59 AM
Incredible story!! Subtle and wicked!!
Aug 23, 2018
Anonymous
10/7/18, 3:42 AM
go more
Joys of Oblivion
10/7/18, 3:20 AM
Great start and great inspiration pic. Could take it a little slower, and it would be even hotter from the stepbrother's perspective.