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10/14/24, 1:49 AM
Really great story!
9/27/24, 5:31 AM
Hope you can post chapter 4 soon

10/14/24, 12:36 AM
@[apolo1](/user/show/957117) Just published
10/12/24, 4:44 AM
I'm back! I'm sorry for disappearing so suddenly, but I finally found some time to finish this story. I hope you like the endings I prepared! As always, I'm accepting any constructive feedback. And I also really want to know which ending you liked the most.

Zander
10/14/24, 12:10 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thank you very much for continuing this story. It was worth the wait) I liked that you took the concept (idea) of two endings of the story, which allows readers to look at and read the story from a different angle and ask the question What if...? I hope that in your other stories endings with two endings will happen often, as with other authors of this website. Personally, I really liked the ending with the victory of Solaris, where he turned the villain Nemesis into his personal slave and left Jack the same
10/14/24, 12:08 AM
You might call this a bad end, but at least everyone seems to be pretty happy! I'm glad you're continuing this series.
10/13/24, 11:34 PM
Please don’t let this one die, it had really developed into something very hot with a lot of potential.
10/13/24, 10:37 PM
so happy to see a new chapter! keep up the good work!
10/13/24, 9:23 PM
I felt bad for Johnny
10/13/24, 9:05 PM
I think I'm going to be coming back to this one
10/13/24, 8:36 PM
Love this reimagination and love your writing, can't wait for more!

10/13/24, 9:03 PM
@[andromeda](/user/show/1014145) Thank you 🥹🥹 I really appreciate it!
10/13/24, 7:54 PM
I can’t wait to see where this goes.