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Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:56 PM
Very well written, funny and interesting! Great premise=magic drinks on your honeymoon!
tomozco
9/23/18, 5:52 PM
ForgottenCradle, thanks for your suggestion! I do already have a general idea of the plots for the next parts, and cops are one of the plots that I intend to write on!
Daniel
9/23/18, 5:10 PM
HYPNO, BIKER, CORRUPTION...A+ dude- wank material for sure...I.J.S.
9/23/18, 4:19 PM
A cliff hanger worthy of Victor Hugo! You've got such a vivid imagination! This is turning out to be a wonderful story - I'm not sure any sexual activity can counteract the narrative. Great going, and looking forward to more!
ForgottenCradle
9/23/18, 4:03 PM
That was a really great story. I love these oblivious stories. Say,will there be more? I mean,Ed basicly told us some scenarios. This story has so much potential
Thegreatstoryteller
9/23/18, 3:37 PM
ah! Always leaving us on a cliff hanger! brilliant job with this story though. love where its going
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
9/23/18, 3:26 PM
Excellent story and excellent conclusion. We enjoy your stories... its ok if some don't get as much traction as others... just write what you love and we fans will follow along Being Good Boys.
Daniel- hypno, bikers and corruption- these are a few of mmy favorite things...great job dude I.J.S.
9/23/18, 2:58 PM
SEE ABOVE, SORRY I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/23/18, 12:30 PM
i wish those urinals were real mmmmmhhh
Anonymous
9/23/18, 12:11 PM
Wow wow and wow! I came like twice from reading this!