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10/14/24, 2:16 PM
@PCM If you allow me to be a bit of a power-sacler, I think this will help in future projects: I call this the scale of the dieties/trasnformers in the world, there will be five ranks, with the lowest being the weakest and the highest beitn the strongest, the idea is that beings of a certain levels, or turned by beings of said levels, can't convert/transform people under the same level, but can with people of lower levels, and people are free to add more at any one rank as time goes by: Rank 0: mundane craters with transformation magic, like the orcs who have been mentioned from time to time Rank 1: Minor gods like the Dawn, the Dusk and the sentinel, who we will see in the north arc Rank 2: Primal gods, like the beast, the arboreal, the abyss/depth and the destroyer Rank 3: Extra planar: like the demons and the Fey (The MC of the dragon what-if story is part fey, and there will be some in the north too) Rank 4: Cornerstones: races that have existed ever since the dawn of the world, thus were bathed in the power of creation, like the dragons, so, in a way, the ones who succumbed to the "curse" I will introduce to the what-if I hope this helps I have been putting this together on mw now for a while and I hope it helps with the storytelling of future projects, and I hope more people add more to any of any of the layers

Pcm
10/14/24, 2:56 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) There are so many comments i didnt see yours, sorry! I dont want to create a rigid rule personally as it would derail too much from the fun of erotica where everyrhing goes. However, I do like the idea of power scaling. I would say that there is the need to distinguish between power in a sense of might and corruptive ability. For example, I would wager that a lone demon is less powerdul than a lone beastman in a fight, but the demon has a much higher corruptive power that could transform a beastman while the beastman cannot do it. Whether thay limitation is a racial thing or simply because that beastman in particular is not 'sesuctive enough' is up for you to decide

10/14/24, 3:03 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) See this guideline as mors of a "who can transform who" scale, that I hope is open enough for future works

Pcm
10/14/24, 3:05 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Then I somewhat agree, but dont want to make it concrete. As long as humans are on the bottom of the scale, taht is fine

10/14/24, 3:26 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Fair

10/14/24, 3:46 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) They are, don't worry
10/14/24, 3:29 PM
Short, sweet and magical story! Terrific writer when it comes to describing that moment of submission, letting go and being the slut you were born to be...mmm
May 14, 2024
Fred Ward
10/14/24, 2:33 PM
Very nice to hear, always good to hear what gets you going, feel free to reach out with ideas :->
10/14/24, 2:13 PM
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT I HATE ROB SO MUCH! I didn't know I can feel such hate towards a fictional character. Your writing is amazing as usual. I don't like horror stories and I try not to read things that can make me feel bad emotions, but I'm just captivated by your story. I hope that Alex will at least be able to "monkey paw" Rob's commands, interpreting them against him, or at least to Alex's best interest, but it doesn't seem like it. I'm glad to see there's a sliver of hope! At some point I found myself hoping that Alex will brake or even worse just so he could escape this reality. On another note, I'm glad to see you're posting again. Given the reactions to the previous chapter I was worried you were put off or hurt by us the commenters. I think I can speak for everyone when I say that we don't wish to hurt you or judge you in any way. Good luck with your partner! I know how it feels to keeping interests hidden, so feel free to vent. Waiting eagerly to the next chapter ๐Ÿ™‚
10/10/24, 4:26 AM
Very hot story! I would never have thought that the Omega had all the fun.

10/14/24, 1:06 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) It felt like a good flip! Win-win for all involved.
hairyartist
10/14/24, 12:20 PM
Thanks, I love this!
10/14/24, 11:41 AM
Ohvmy, this turn of events was unexpected. Very cool!
Zander
10/14/24, 11:37 AM
Great continuation of the story, I like the writing and the length of the chapters, which allows you to savor the story for a long time, and also that the story becomes more and more darkly erotic. The only negative is the lack of a sense of vigilance and intuition in the characters that something is wrong. There is not a single intelligent character that is worth worrying about and rooting for and interesting to watch. There is a lack of a character similar to the main hero who can stand up to the main villain, who collects a harem of male slaves for his sexual whims. Of course, I would like to see in the plot someone who will not stupidly fall for such a trick with a bracelet. The only character who was close to this was Ryan's wife, but she had to be leaked for the development of the plot, so that the Main Villain could achieve more and take control of more men from the characters' families. I really like the idea of โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹the story in a sexual way, but I would like Dave not to succeed in everything (so that he is not a Mary Sue character). I would also like to know how he created these mind control bracelets? No human could create something like this without the intervention of otherworldly forces. And I want to know if the bracelet is removed or broken, will the person under its influence return to normal and remember everything that happened to him? Let's hope that the story will have unexpected turns and the ending will be unexpected and unpredictable, where all readers will not be able to say that Dave won or not) In this case, you can simply make two endings, Good and Bad, where everyone can satisfy their expectations.
DD
8/24/24, 4:59 PM
New Chapter Soon?

8/28/24, 8:39 AM
@DD I'll probably release Supercop Ch.2 first.

Anonymous
10/14/24, 6:32 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) New Chapter this week?

10/14/24, 11:14 AM
@Anonymous Not on this story though. I have really no other reason aside from I was lazy.