Recent Comments

TimNJ
9/20/18, 9:30 PM
Though sex with Satan was a bit confusing, I am definitely loving these stories and hope they continue. They are so devoid of cliche. By the way, using the name "Jude" as in Judas was an inspired touch in the first story. His character interests me, was he also another religious student until being corrupted by the priest?
9/20/18, 7:33 PM
The random demon thing made me go "huh?". So can't say I'm much a fan of that.
9/20/18, 7:27 PM
Ok that last comment is the best thing anyone has ever said about anything I have ever written in my entire life im DYING XD
Anonymous
9/20/18, 7:27 PM
nice
Anonymous
9/20/18, 6:56 PM
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Anonymous
9/20/18, 6:54 PM
Definitely didn't see the satanic twist coming, but I'm thrilled you're continuing the story! Sexy stuff. dumb asian ho <333
thandi karmasyde
9/20/18, 6:52 PM
I enjoyed the changes, *especially* Ashley. I like the way reality was turned on its head, and would've liked more ongoing descriptions of their memories and lives unraveling and reforming. Great job.
Sep 20, 2018
9/20/18, 6:36 PM
Hot story! Will we meet any of his other nub boys or discover how the master can cause such transformations?
Sep 20, 2018
Anonymous
9/20/18, 6:03 PM
Keep it up, please
nycboot
9/20/18, 5:24 PM
Thank you for the latest installment and for your kind words! But it's totally your idea AND writing that makes your stories so erotic in a wonderful way. Maybe many wait for sex, but when I come across a sentence like this: "So beautiful, pure, like an endless sapphire lake" - to me that stands out because of the thought and the poetic writing. I enjoy characters who struggle with their transformations/mind-alterations, so having Jeremy needing to clear his thoughts is wonderful to me. You don't rush the pace so it's all-the-more wonderful to savor every sentence and word. Like I said with your first story, you must have a conservationist's mind - the loving attention you give to all the natural phenomena eroticizes them and makes the story even more hot. Your writing is really special and poetic. I look forward to (what I presume will be) the final installment. I'll be patient - please don't rush things. Better to be beautiful than a quick j/o. :)