Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/20/18, 3:33 AM
Love these one shots from you where you branch out and try something "off the formula". For me the phrase "nut-brown young man" was repeated too much, started feeling like something caught between my teeth after a while . Still, great story. I love the wistful longing/certainty-of-return at the end... fall may be here IRL, but summer will come again!
Anonymous
9/20/18, 3:19 AM
It's a great story.. nebulous in parts begging for a reveal in the next story .. I feel trepidation that there will be a betrayal which would be sad.. How refreshing it would be to see them Happily ever after.
Anonymous
9/20/18, 2:19 AM
Great, as usual. Your stories are a must read.
Anonymous
9/20/18, 1:46 AM
So glad you rebooted this series, its still my favorite. Keep it up!
blankbot
9/20/18, 1:33 AM
The second-person approach works well here, and I can see the story continuing. Nicely done.
Anonymous
9/20/18, 1:20 AM
great start. keep it going.
Anonymous
9/19/18, 10:34 PM
This was great! I hope there will be more!
9/19/18, 6:24 PM
Can't wait for the next part... but I will happily.
Anonymous
9/19/18, 2:58 PM
Short and sweet. Awesome :)
Andyrew36
9/19/18, 2:03 PM
OMG I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!!! I WOULD BUY EVERY BOOK IN THIS SERIES! ❤ The addiction he felt with the silicon as well as the surprise donut pumped asshole sent me over the edge! i cannot wait to see whats next for you!! do you have writing anywhere else?