Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/14/18, 8:37 PM
was hoping for a superman follow up. but this is good too.
Anonymous
9/14/18, 8:05 PM
Love imagining Chris Pratt in this very position. >:)
Joel B.
9/14/18, 7:23 PM
More please!!!
Chris Conners
9/14/18, 6:36 PM
Great story. I hope you will continue.
nycboot
9/14/18, 6:15 PM
Oh my! Who wouldn't want to be assimilated? You touched all the right buttons! And your writing! "...creating a massive hovering armada of glistening, dripping tentacles" - amazingly picturesque! Wonderful!
Luke
9/14/18, 4:46 PM
Great job. The elder brother, jack, is definitely the hottest character by far. Why not keeping him around ,and seeing what kind of chemistry develops?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/14/18, 3:15 PM
there will be a part 4?
J.J.
9/14/18, 2:01 PM
Very hot! I loved the detail.
ForgottenCradle
9/14/18, 9:35 AM
this one was really nice. I enjoyed it a lot
9/14/18, 5:39 AM
To the last commenter: You'll be happy to know that I'm actually working on another "Six Pack" story now.