Recent Comments

Chris Conners
9/14/18, 6:36 PM
Great story. I hope you will continue.
nycboot
9/14/18, 6:15 PM
Oh my! Who wouldn't want to be assimilated? You touched all the right buttons! And your writing! "...creating a massive hovering armada of glistening, dripping tentacles" - amazingly picturesque! Wonderful!
Luke
9/14/18, 4:46 PM
Great job. The elder brother, jack, is definitely the hottest character by far. Why not keeping him around ,and seeing what kind of chemistry develops?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/14/18, 3:15 PM
there will be a part 4?
J.J.
9/14/18, 2:01 PM
Very hot! I loved the detail.
ForgottenCradle
9/14/18, 9:35 AM
this one was really nice. I enjoyed it a lot
9/14/18, 5:39 AM
To the last commenter: You'll be happy to know that I'm actually working on another "Six Pack" story now.
Anonymous
9/14/18, 5:24 AM
Good start. will you be continuing family matters too?
9/14/18, 12:26 AM
Great concept. I like the transformation and time forward. I'm not even curious about how and why because it was so good. And a nice change having the sex part be hole eating, versus the normal suck and fuck. That's all he wanted to do and his plans only include that...trying out the different flavors. Well done.
Nov 9, 2017
Anonymous
9/13/18, 11:28 PM
Hot as fuck, more please.