Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/14/18, 5:24 AM
Good start. will you be continuing family matters too?
9/14/18, 12:26 AM
Great concept. I like the transformation and time forward. I'm not even curious about how and why because it was so good. And a nice change having the sex part be hole eating, versus the normal suck and fuck. That's all he wanted to do and his plans only include that...trying out the different flavors. Well done.
Nov 9, 2017
Anonymous
9/13/18, 11:28 PM
Hot as fuck, more please.
Anonymous
9/13/18, 9:32 PM
god i love this story. i would love for you to do another with mariposa . d:-)
Subboy93
9/13/18, 5:13 PM
Moooorrrrrreeeeee
Sep 10, 2018
9/13/18, 1:38 PM
Hi Chris, sorry to read that there will be no second part ........ but hope you reconsider 😀😀😀😀
9/12/18, 10:40 PM
Thanks guys for your comments! Glad this first part has caught some of your interests. I'm still working on the rest of the story, hopefully I can work out the second part in not too long away. Thanks!
biguynj
9/12/18, 3:59 PM
Always good to see a writer revisit a work and continue.  Really enjoy this story
Anonymous
9/12/18, 12:05 PM
Hopping for the part 2, it's already to long of awaiting
9/12/18, 5:21 AM
@Darmani Zach was still within the bounds of the house when David's wish was made, which had dramatically more pronounced effects as seen in Jake and Brendan. Combine with Brendan's earlier wish for someone both he and Jake would love are doing double duty on our corrupt policeman.