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ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 5:58 PM
this was by far the hottest chapter. I loved every part of it. thrilled to see who will join them next
Anonymous
9/11/18, 4:00 PM
nice start. can't wait to see where it goes from here.
ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 2:59 PM
niiiiiice one! Now the cops get involved
ForgottenCradle
9/11/18, 2:27 PM
This is an interesting start. I really want to know what becomes of the businessman. I like it,the unaware parts intrigue me.
9/11/18, 10:27 AM
Cheers, ForgottenCradle, I actually had a lot of fun with this concept, it was one of the faster stories from concept to completion too. Hypnothrill, thank you! I did consider having a couple of extra do-overs in there, slowing down the change, but I was worried it would get repetitive. And Heru Kane, well Devon definitely deserved a birthday present for all his hard work. I'd actually like playing around with this concept in some more stories. I think next time I'd have a few more background events going on.
9/11/18, 9:16 AM
Thanks for commenting! I was wondering if people were going to like this one quite so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Heru Kane, well I'm not sure what provoked the change in the first place, honestly I was thinking it was something completely inane, like cutting him off while walking or something. There were a few iterations of this idea actually, dealing with a pickpocket, getting turned away from a bar by a bouncer, but in the end I just went with something unknown because the story wound up being so far after the fact.
Anonymous
9/11/18, 8:16 AM
Amazing. First cock tf that I really enjoyed. We definitely need more stories like that one.
Anonymous
9/11/18, 6:57 AM
i want the family matters ...
Anonymous
9/11/18, 4:51 AM
keep going with this story!
9/11/18, 3:00 AM
Thanks everyone! Glad you liked the slutty outfits; it wasn't part of the original outline but decided to add it as I was writing. Glad it paid off. @TheD; I have at least 2 more chapters lined up but it may stretch to 3 if I'm too long winded.