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6/29/25, 2:07 AM
Can't wait to read more, I would like to see those hot Jocks that the dad mentioned.

6/29/25, 5:01 AM
@[Reddogsss](/user/show/10033308) They will be in next chapter, along with some other variants
Jun 27, 2025
6/29/25, 2:32 AM
Really cool story. Very original. I can’t wait for more.
6/29/25, 1:21 AM
Great start.
6/28/25, 11:13 PM
Love a wanting conversion!

6/29/25, 1:20 AM
@[pwr0n](/user/show/2637035) So do I
6/28/25, 6:52 PM
Hot!

6/29/25, 1:20 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thanks!
6/28/25, 10:37 PM
This is great. Love it
6/28/25, 9:45 PM
This comedic humiliation is really good written and makes lust for more
6/28/25, 9:21 PM
Very hot first chapter. Promise more
Anonymous
6/28/25, 9:09 PM
Incredibly hot, can’t wait for the next part
6/28/25, 8:48 PM
I liked this a lot. I'm very into reality-change stuff where guys get jocked up good. It sorta reminded me a little bit of "Troublemaker" by Octavian on here, cuz that one's a nerdy guy sitting next to a jock in detention and it's reality-change... in that case it's jocking up but also wolfing out/anthro/werewolf/furry. Anyway, I'm real interested in where this is gonna go. I kinda wished that the "Monday" chapter had been longer, but that's just cuz I liked it. The mention of a few other people at the very beginning confused me a little... I take it his dad is a sheriff? But I didn't know who the other guys (Scott, Derek) were. Introducing them early is good if they're gonna show up later in the story and take part, which I'm assuming they will, but I didn't know the relationships. I also didn't understand where it said their recent times hanging out were about running away from a supernatural creature. Oh yeah, one thing I really liked was how in his head something keeps telling him that the changes are wrong but he's incapable of figuring it out cuz it all seems like it's always been as it unfolds. Looking forward to the next chapter.