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Boston Satyr
9/8/18, 5:16 PM
Please do finish it!! I've returned to this one over and over. It's so sexual, and great fun.
Boston Satyr
9/8/18, 4:54 PM
I kept reading into it that Buster was actually a man, i.e. not a literal dog, but another dominated hypnotized pupper. But at the end, I guess that is not what the author intended. Would have been an even more amazing twist at the end if that were so. It would have made the story more compelling if the transition took longer, i.e. Kyle feeling drawn to Carlos, but not immediately with the snap of a finger dominated. Just my two cents. An awesome story overall, but with it being so short, it feels like a one-off. Carlos' pic = muy caliente. Where's Buddy?!?!?! :-(
Anonymous
9/8/18, 3:33 PM
It was hot, too!!
Anonymous
9/8/18, 3:21 PM
Here's a thought -- Marco got rid of Buddy. He kept his dog and Kyle.
Anonymous
9/8/18, 3:19 PM
It's a hot story. A lot of creepy subtext, but the story is still hot.
Stephen
9/8/18, 3:10 PM
Nice. I should change my name to Tim.... :-)
Stephen
9/8/18, 12:36 PM
Wow, what a great story. Amazing writing, too. As a bottom, with a average to small dick, I really liked how the writer "talked" to us. LOVED the ending with the van coming to take him away. I was hoping that would lead into a bit more in the way of mind control, but it was really good the way it was, too!
jw5346912@gmail.com
9/8/18, 11:06 AM
Great story
ernestcharleskontz@hotmail.com
9/8/18, 7:35 AM
I was wondering that, then thought maybe Buddy became Buster and Marco didn't have a dog Buster. After all he said he new Kyle would be his new puppy. Also he took over Kyle's home.
BlindSeer0
9/8/18, 6:06 AM
I'll be honest, i spent the last part of this story also wondering what happened to Buddy. I always enjoy a good pup story though, so good job.