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boy23
9/8/18, 2:34 AM
WoW loved it ! !
Anonymous
9/8/18, 12:53 AM
I second the question of what happened to Buddy
Anonymous
9/7/18, 7:40 PM
But what happened to BUDDY?!
Daniel
9/7/18, 7:21 PM
I love SYFY erotica...sometimes the shared collaborative energies of two Artists results in muddled confusianary narratives, but when a mutual effort results in material the reader does not want to end.....BRAVO Gentlemen, let us see where this wonderful tale takes us ! I?J?S?
Anonymous
9/7/18, 4:12 PM
Tino was a very nice ending - lucky Tino!!!
Anonymous
9/7/18, 4:10 PM
amazing start... in terms of the next chapter - is Milos the leader or just a drone doing what is required of him? is he just preparing others to ship off campus or will the dorm become a larger hub? how will the other floors of the dorm become involved? will guys join willingly with the rest of the crew or will they need to be forced? just some questions that could be answered... look forward to the next installment!
itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 12:29 PM
I do not know what to think about it. Poor Em. I would even have preferred to have his memory erased or something like that.
itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 10:58 AM
I understand it perfectly. It is not necessary to announce "flashback" or something like that. Only that it is understood that it is something that happens in the past, and to whom it refers. Of course it can be improved.
MKThirtyLicks
9/7/18, 12:13 AM
i want to go in that cave....mmmm
Daniel
9/7/18, 12:09 AM
love it, Love It, LOVE IT !!! Dude this pushed my 'hotboy'buttons HARD!! Please follow this up with a.....Family Reunion back at the Space Station...please? I.J.S.KIUT