Recent Comments

Daniel
9/7/18, 7:21 PM
I love SYFY erotica...sometimes the shared collaborative energies of two Artists results in muddled confusianary narratives, but when a mutual effort results in material the reader does not want to end.....BRAVO Gentlemen, let us see where this wonderful tale takes us ! I?J?S?
Anonymous
9/7/18, 4:12 PM
Tino was a very nice ending - lucky Tino!!!
Anonymous
9/7/18, 4:10 PM
amazing start... in terms of the next chapter - is Milos the leader or just a drone doing what is required of him? is he just preparing others to ship off campus or will the dorm become a larger hub? how will the other floors of the dorm become involved? will guys join willingly with the rest of the crew or will they need to be forced? just some questions that could be answered... look forward to the next installment!
itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 12:29 PM
I do not know what to think about it. Poor Em. I would even have preferred to have his memory erased or something like that.
itsuwarik.
9/7/18, 10:58 AM
I understand it perfectly. It is not necessary to announce "flashback" or something like that. Only that it is understood that it is something that happens in the past, and to whom it refers. Of course it can be improved.
MKThirtyLicks
9/7/18, 12:13 AM
i want to go in that cave....mmmm
Daniel
9/7/18, 12:09 AM
love it, Love It, LOVE IT !!! Dude this pushed my 'hotboy'buttons HARD!! Please follow this up with a.....Family Reunion back at the Space Station...please? I.J.S.KIUT
Daniel
9/6/18, 11:45 PM
SYFY erotica is so f*****g hot ! The subversive corruption is a real fetish of mine and you write it in a very colorful, descriptive manner that I find charming and sexually stimulating....not an easy combination to achieve, CONGRATS DUDE...I.J.S.UT
itsuwarik.
9/6/18, 11:38 PM
I am very happy and satisfied with the end of Mark and Nick. For a moment I thought Tom would become the alpha male ... Thank God that this is not true. At least not in the sense that his brothers in the fraternity fell into submission. I almost believed that everything would revolve around him. So I really liked that you left Mark and Nick out of that. Welcome be the romance.
the same woman who commented on the last one
9/6/18, 10:54 PM
And you outdid yourself again. This series is the best I've read to date. You execute this concept so well!